Blog feedback #1

Your post is clearly made and explained simple enough so that someone who knows very little about line art, like myself, can understand. You state what the post is about early on and keep the red thread through-out with very few to almost none tangents. By the end I understand exactly why paying attention to line art is important and how it affects character design, perceived character personalities and how it can work with the game aesthetic. The post is easy to digest and leaves the reader with some desire to read into character design further. It also sparks conversation and discussion about design in general. It’s also a pretty enjoyable subject!
I don’t have much feedback for improvement, except maybe having example pictures of how a character’s personality can be changed with line art, but that is just me nit-picking at this point. All in all, a well written post.